Upon inspection, the results appear to be quite positive.
However, there are areas we can improve on. For example, in many of the feedback questionnaires, the audience didn't quite understand how or why the 'evil' self who represents reality chases the protagonist up the tree.
To improve on this we could work on the plot so that it is easier to understand (and not so complicated).
However, the groups did like the idea of having a darker self -wearing a black suit- opposing the protagonist.
The main area to work on is our plot, as at the moment it is quite weak and there are various gaps within the story: it doesn't quite link together.
TARGET: work on improving the plot of our video by making sure it fits together and is easier to understand.
A good self assessment idea, Carl. Please ensure your Focus Group results are presented accordingly - bar charts etc. Also, how will you ensure your plot is easier to understand?
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