http://charlottebourgea2media1112.stratfordcollege.net/
This person's blog is very detailed and in depth, however, she hasn't used a variety of sources. To improve on her work she could add more images, links to other websites and just make the blog more interactive and easier to read.
http://ryancarrolla2media.blogspot.co.uk/
This has a slightly interactive blog but the thing that really stands out is that he has written about what has gone wrong and what he has done to try and get around his problems. This may have got him higher marks in his coursework. It is something that I should also think about doing when i face problems with my work and blog.
http://lucy-garstka.blogspot.co.uk/
This person's blog is very interactive in forms of pictures, as it has images of all different stages of their work. The work is also very detailed.
To improve he could use a vaster variety of sources such as links, and filming of him working and things along those lines.
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