Post-16 Feedback Form

Focus:

Josh Lockey, Karl Gillings, Carl Ward - Pitch

Strengths:

1. Well prepared, detailed presentation

2. Use of images and a clip on your PPT

3. A good use of key terminology to show your understanding: Goodwin’s Theory, Pathetic Phallecy, White Balance etc

4. You showed progression well, particularly with your story board examples

Areas for improvement:

1. Don’t read off of the board – you should be looking at the audience

2. Show the original version of the music you are using, explaining why it was appealling

3. Different camera shots and angles to enhance your work

Resulting Actions (student response):

- Don’t read off the board for future pitches (create info cards)

Carl Ward's A2 Media Portfolio