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Post-16 Feedback Form

 

Focus: Digipak cover feedback

Strengths: 1.      A good cohesion between the front and the back. 2.      Your font choice for the song’s name stands out really well and it catches your eye straight away. 3.      You have incorporated some but not all of the conventions of form.

Areas for improvement: 1.      This is from OCR: The digipak and magazine advertisement “should be based on actual research by the candidates, illustrated in their evidence, so that they can justify their choices by reference to industry practice.” Have you ensured this is the case? 2.      How does your product reflect all of your planning and research? 3.      What place will your digipak cover have in the industry – do they usually have an embossed style of image or is this a new venture?

Resulting Actions  (student response):     1)      Began to illustrate evidence. 2)      Starting to show how my product reflects my planning and research