Post-16 Feedback Form

Focus:

Pitch Feedback

Strengths:

1. A much more professional presentation with strong links to genre, audience, font etc.

2. Ideas of your generic layout for your digipak as well as an analysis of existing products.

3. Excellent level of detailed ideas as well as alternative options to use when planning.

Areas for improvement:

1. You said ‘urm…’ quite a lot – try to be fluent when presenting.

2. More visuals could have been used instead of just templates of ideas.

3. Explicit links should be made to show how your digipak and magazine advert match.

Resulting Actions (student response):

- Don’t say ‘urm’ so much in future pitches: make it more fluent and professional looking.