Monday, 30 December 2013

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Focus:
29.12.13
Research and Planning (12/20 = Level 3)
Strengths:
1.      Good time management skills.
2.      Good evidence of drafting both your digipak and your magazine advertisement.
3.      You have researched different font types but not sizes.
4.      You have started to show the necessary connections between the digipak and magazine advertisement with some conventions of form being covered.
Areas for improvement:
1.      Ensure all tasks are uploaded as you cannot leave a level 2 whilst it is incomplete. Your final magazine advertisement / digipak is missing.
2.      A wider range of ICT programmes could have been used.
3.      Your font research should have been more detailed, including the importance of size.
4.      Your own photographs are needed with posts to show how you are editing your own photographs to suit your magazine advertisement and digipak.
Resulting Actions  (student response):
 
 
1) In future, use a wider range of IT skills
2) Start practising and editing my own photos 
 
 
 

 

Focus:
29.12.13
Print
Level 2
Strengths:
 
1.      Some evidence of cropping and re-sizing when planning.
2.      Your mise-en-scene is appropriate to both the task and your genre in the image you found on the Internet – you have mentioned target audience to show the appropriateness of your planning.
3.      You have attempted to integrate your text into your image on the magazine advertisement.
4.      Some research into existing products with detailed commentary as well as some templates to show your intention.

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